Coyote Too

This piece is 2 or 3 chapters into an urban fantasy I am writing, and it's only the first page and a half of the chapter. I haven't written any of the rest yet, I wanted to start here to try to get a feeling for how the whole thing would work but picking a critical moment for the main character and expanding on that. This is very much a first rough draft (I've barely re-read it myself), so I'm not looking for syntax corrections, I'm just curious whether it feels right. Does the story draw you in? Does it need more or less description? That sort of thing. I'd very much appreciate that feedback (and anything else you'd care to offer). Many thanks.

The Augury

The Harvard T stop was was full of the usual rush-hour crowd; students streaming out of their last classes, business people headed home, and a strong cross-current of people inbound for dinner and entertainment. A train had just unloaded a crowd of early supper seekers, and Megan had trouble keeping up with Patrick. He passed through the turnstile while she was still fumbling for her pass, and he seemed to flow through the crowd as though no one was there. She jogged the few last yards to catch up with him at the edge of the platform.